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I need ideas about a stolen childhood


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#1 killerx525

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Posted 18 March 2011 - 06:37 PM

I need ideas for my free verse poems about stolen childhood. I've written only 6 lines which i need 30 lines. Also can anybody give me tips on writing these type of poems?

A Lost Childhood

A new life is born and a life with full of hopes
The door opened to my adulthood
I had nothing, nothing to lose
The spirit of childhood faded into the darkness
I want to go back, back to the days,
I had no reason to live with this terror.

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Posted 19 March 2011 - 08:26 AM

Be more specific about some of the things that were stolen from your childhood.
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Posted 19 March 2011 - 08:35 AM

Producing it is hard for me. I can think of what were stolen from my childhood but i just don't know how to write it.

Edited by killerx525, 19 March 2011 - 08:38 AM.

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Posted 19 March 2011 - 10:15 AM

I suggest make a list of a few items you will want to enter.
As you think you keep reading it aloud from the beginning. This will help you feel the cadence (the flow and sound of it). To me this helps produce the next lines.
Write it down... you can always change it when its done.
Be honest as making up stuff will make it hard to keep your thought.
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Posted 19 March 2011 - 06:19 PM

To let you know the book i have to read is a free verse novel called "The Simple Gift" written by Steven Herrick which i need to write a free verse poem myself.

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